Orchid Room Productions
From an award-winning writer to a determined reader

Your script, read the way a commissioner reads it.

I spent seven years as an executive producer at National Geographic Channel, evaluating third-party pitches from the buying side. I'm also a working screenwriter — twelve scripts to date, three as paid assignments, twice awarded at Jaipur IFF — so I take notes as often as I give them. Now I read your script and tell you exactly what a buyer will think, which pages prove it, and what to fix first.

Email me your script PDF attachment, any tier below, to sunilrpappu@orchidroomproductions.com — I reply within one business day.

Three ways in

Coverage in 48

₹3,999 ₹1,999 / $49 $25
Feature or pilot, up to 120 pages · delivered within 48 hours · launch price — first five scripts only
  • Verdict — PASS / CONSIDER / RECOMMEND — for the script and for you as a writer
  • Ten-dimension scorecard (the Orchid Ten) with page citations
  • Structural read: act proportions, midpoint, low point, ending
  • 3–6 fixes, ranked — what to change, where, in what order
Read a full sample report → Book & Pay →

Feature Pitch Package

₹14,999 / $179
For a finished script going out · 7–14 days
  • Three logline variants + one-page synopsis
  • 6–8 page treatment
  • Positioning: comps, audience, budget profile
  • Query letter draft
  • Includes Coverage in 48 of your current draft
Book & Pay →

Series Pitch Deck

₹29,999 / $359
Channel-ready, up to 15 pages · 7–14 days
  • Concept and show summary — with the series engine stated plainly
  • Main character profiles
  • Season-one episode summaries (a tight paragraph each)
  • Seasons 2–5, a paragraph each
  • Tone, comps, contact page
  • Add-on: full series treatment (episode breakdowns, actor-ready character material) +₹14,999
Read a sample excerpt → Book & Pay →

Overseas / paying in USD? Pay via PayPal (no GST) — Coverage $25 (launch) · Package $179 · Deck $359. Then email your script to start. (Tick the box above to enable.)

All INR prices are inclusive of GST. Overseas payments in USD. EMI (3–12 months, on eligible cards) available on the Package and Deck tiers. Terms, payments & cancellation policy.

Producers & production houses: I don’t sell documents to producers — I partner on projects. Pick one from your slate: I rebuild its pitch deck at no upfront cost; if the project is commissioned or set up, I take a story/development credit and a pre-agreed fee then. Email me the project.

Why this exists

Too many writers are sold shortcuts — “packaging,” “access,” “introductions” — by people who can’t improve a script’s chances. The industry is consolidated and opaque; there is no shortcut through that wall. The one thing a writer controls is the craft on the page. I spent six years studying it and seven years on the buying side watching it decide outcomes. The read is priced like the professional work it is, and every report gets the same undivided attention. The point is still fewer good scripts dying of bad guidance.

And coverage is only step one. The longer goal is Orchid Room itself: a writers’ room where every writer’s voice is heard, where we shape unique stories together — and where we hold the line on what our writing is actually worth, not the pennies being offered for vertical dramas and quick-turnaround content. Pragmatic about the industry, hopeful about the craft. If that sounds like a room you’d want to be in, the door is a script.

How it works

  1. Email your script (PDF) and the tier you want.
  2. I confirm scope and turnaround; you pay.
  3. Delivery on time — coverage in 48 hours, packages and bibles in 7–14 days.
  4. One round of follow-up questions included, every tier.

Who’s reading

Sunil Pappu. Seven years executive producer at National Geographic Channel — 100+ hours produced, third-party pitches evaluated on the buying side. Commissioned work: a five-season OTT thriller series bible (GuruFilms, 2022–23) and a documentary-series bible (Bottom Eye, 2019–20). Paid story editor on the London feature Odile (May Filmworks, 2021).

As a writer: seven feature scripts and five TV series written to date — one feature and two series as paid writing assignments. Runner-up, Jaipur International Film Festival 2024 (Fake Call); Special Grand Jury, Jaipur 2022 (Invisible Graves); two Big Break quarter-finals. MA, Newhouse School, Syracuse University. Master Screenwriter Certificate. Member, Screenwriters Association, Mumbai.

Straight answers

Will you be honest?
Yes. Most scripts get CONSIDER or PASS. You’re paying for the read a buyer gives you for free — except this one comes with the reasons.
Do you use AI?
I use my own development tooling for first-pass analysis; every page citation, score, and note is verified and written out by me. Nothing goes to you that I haven’t checked against your actual pages.
Is my script confidential?
Read for this report only — never shared, never used for anything else.
What formats?
Features and pilots, English or Hindi/English. PDF preferred.